BULLFIGHTING A NATIONAL
TRADITION
Bullfighting
is a very well-know
tradition in Spain. There are a lot of bullrings all around the
country where you can go to see it. There are people who love this
tradition but other people hate it.
Firstly,
I think bullfighting is a good tradition because is culture
and it collects courage and beauty. It's
a cultural tradition that has been done for many years and
if you
remove it you're removing a very important component of our culture.
Also, before the bullfight people treat bulls so good. Bulls
live much better than people usually think, they live in liberty and
they have a life plenty of food and whatever a good bull's life
should have. I also
think that running of bulls is a sample of respect
and appreciation
about the strength of
animals. Another
advantage is that bullfighting attract many tourists for all the
country. It's known all
over the world and it helps us to make a lot of money.
On
the other hand, some people think that bullfighting
is a torture, but bulls don't suffer as much as people think. However
there are others animals that suffer more and people don't worry
about them.
To
sum up, I think that bullfighting is a beautiful tradition
that give us a personal
symbol.
A few mistakes:
ResponderEliminarwell-known
don't forget subjects: because IT is culture
People treat bulls so good--- Bulls are treated very well.
It's a good essay, but next time try to write more balanced paragraphs( the paragraph in favour of the feast is much longer)